Outline
1.- Intoduction
a) thesis statement
2.- Her personality
a)positive aspects
b)negative aspects
3.-My relationship with her
4.-Treasure moments
5.- Conclusion
The most especial woman in my life
The most sensitive woman that I have never met in my life is my mother, she is a significant person in my life, a woman who smells like a flower and her feelings are fragile like crystal. If you would know her you will notice that she is beautiful inside and outside, she always makes me be a better person. I do not remember when I saw her for the first time, but I know that this moment was so special for her, because she is so sensitive.
She has an unique personality, she is lovely and elegant, she always appreciate the people for who they are, she is so simple and she laughs easily, she has a particular laugh, her teeth are white and the ones at the front are a little bit bigger than the others, the tone of her laugh is discreet and she almost always cover her mouth with her right hand when she laughs. I think that she is very shy, discreet and reserved with her personal things, she does not use to say something wrong about anyone. I can compare her with an ice sculpture, she is complex and gorgeous piece of art but at the same time she is fragile. She is a hard worker woman, she cares too much about her work, she always thinks about what she is going to do or why she did certain things, when she does this, she always takes in account the opinion of my father, when she has a doubt she bow her head, she put her hand on her hip and talks about the worries that she has, she is so comical when she does it. Even when she has positive and negative aspects I can say that she is strong, brilliant and a great person, in general she is very special for me.
She has been my best friend since I was born, even when she is hard to understand, my relationship with her is good and sometimes queer because she can be so sweet with me but when she is tired she get angry especially with me. Honestly, she does not look like my mother because she is tinier than me, when we walk together I feel like a giant, it is because she is so short but when she uses high heels she looks higher than me but her steps sound like a little person walking next to me, she is so petite and cute.
We shared many treasure moments, she is a good adviser, she always makes me feel important because she always listen to me, I remember an especial moment from my childhood, one day I came from playing with a friend but I was crying and I could not speak, she took me in her arms and she asked me: what is the matter, honey?, I only saw her and told her that my friend Hilda told me that Jesus does not exist, and I asked her with my weak voice, Is it true mom? And she hugged me stronger than the first time at the same time she explained me the entire story, I looked her and I felt so protected and peaceful, it was wonderful that my mom was there for me, she is my best support.
My mother is the most sensitive, delicate, dedicated, stronger and beautiful woman that I have never known, I think that she is a unique person, she is the support of my family, and I admire and love her so much.

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